nyuk nyuk

[terryansimon]

a bit old. a bit sparse. but hey, I find it funny. okay fine call me childish but I swear I've marked english compositions of the same standard. not to say I'm any better. (=

[Ridemtb]

haha....i got that email...but how com sooo short...i tot got a few page?

[terryansimon]

haha....i got that email...but how com sooo short...i tot got a few page?

oh that one is about some boy in hong kong with the third eye who can see ghost in some shopping centre

and he actually got a C+ for that composition. hahaha.

[ZiT]

omg the teacher actually gave a B and then corrected to C+ after that..what was she thinking? she actually thought that was B-grade material before 2nd thoughts isit.

[DeepBlue]

not bad lah..I think his grammar and vocabulary quite alright leh....jusy that he needs to work on the sentence structures...maybe the child is not used to writing this kind of descriptive compo??

Hey...if it is a P2 to P4 kid...not bad liao in an average class... I once marked a compo and almost fell off the chair laughing

it goes this way "......there was a loud noise outside the house, Mrs Lim and Mrs Lee woked up, Mrs Lee asked Mr Lim to investigate............."

I bet the child didnt know what was so funny...

[seamonkee]

Poor kid must be thinking about his dog...

[[d]3v|L]

Wa handwriting better than mine..

[terryansimon]

not bad lah..I think his grammar and vocabulary quite alright leh....jusy that he needs to work on the sentence structures...maybe the child is not used to writing this kind of descriptive compo??

Hey...if it is a P2 to P4 kid...not bad liao in an average class... I once marked a compo and almost fell off the chair laughing

it goes this way "......there was a loud noise outside the house, Mrs Lim and Mrs Lee woked up, Mrs Lee asked Mr Lim to investigate............."

I bet the child didnt know what was so funny...

I hope that scenario he wrote out wasn't taking place at home. if not it would have been really sad.

[seamonkee]

Worse of all, the teacher added the comment "Slacken, why?"

If she knows jolly well, the small boy must have been traumatised by the death of his dog... She shoul at least have talk and counsel the boy rather than just looking at the composition superficially....

Sometimes, what runs through the head of a kid is deeper than we thought...

[terryansimon]

3v|L,Oct 15 2003, 06:00 PM] Wa handwriting better than mine..

don't bluff lah. yours that terrible meh?

[[d]3v|L]

ya my handwriting a bit doc.

[Dispar_Anthias]

Looks like the kind of compo i have been writing all the time.... OR was the mine

[terryansimon]

Looks like the kind of compo i have been writing all the time.... OR was the mine

pray tell you passed O level English.